Alpha Hell: A Dark Rejected Mates Romance (The Rejected Mate Series Book 1)

Not sure when the reverse harem thing will ACTUALLY happen since right now it’s just three hot guys pining over her and a couple of kissing scenes but I’m still hopeful for the next book. I was completely confused with who she was supposed to end up with when I went back to read a summary and saw it was a reverse harem but nothing had really jumped out yet in the story to make it seem that way.I knew Alaric was Lyrulf but I didn’t know WHO he actually was. Makes sense with his score in the trials. Can’t wait to find out more about Caspian and his demon background.The typos in this book are bad, especially the spelling of a character. It keeps changing from Rizer to Rizor so I’m not entirely sure how it’s supposed to be spelled.There seem to be moments that are missing which could’ve helped with continuity in the plot but I guess the gist was still there.All in all there better be some STEAM in the next one!

So I've read, maybe like 10 G Bailey books.And after the first 3, every single time I always say, "I am never reading this author again." Because they almost always are poorly written and I'm even like 99% sure they're also ghostwritten. But her books constantly show up in my suggestions feed and they always have great covers and an interesting plot. So when this popped up and was a coauthored book, I'm like - wellllll.But no. They are never good. Never. They have great ideas, great premises - but the language and plot are always off. Like someone who doesn't speak English as their first language is writing it and they're exhausted by the end of the novel or with the last installment they just want to be done.About midway through Alpha Hell (yet another poorly written 'Alpha' book) it really starts to lose its shine. Like Scarlett Snow did a lot of extra work to polish it up and finally threw in the towel and called it good. Because lord knows she probably did a ton of extra editing. But again, it's just not successful.Great idea, bad follow through - classic G Bailey. I really wish on Amazon you could (a la Netflix) show your serious extreme disinterest in an author. That way they would never be suggested to you ever ever again. Because I keep saying it G Bailey, I keep saying it, and somehow the algorithm keeps pulling me back.

This book reminded me of a Wattpad story you would read written by a middle schooler. There are so many fantasy plot lines in this story and nothing seemed to settle and really develop. Fated mates? Werewolf shifters? Demons? Yes. Snarky main character who is different? Female main character who was abused for being different yet someone beats all odds with no training? Yes. Bad boy love interest? Forbidden romance? Brothers best friend? Prince lover boy? All yes. This book was all over the place and could not settle on one idea it seemed.Also, for some reason everyone spoke with British accents but yet they were from America?I wish I could say it was an easy, enjoyable read but it just frustrated me more than anything.

****Spoilers*****Alpha hell was absolutely amazing that ending is killing me though. I swear my jaw just hung open for a little while though.Lilith is such a fun character I loved how she was written but there were so many surprises that I really didn’t expect honestly......One was I couldn’t believe that dove betrayed Lilith I was really starting to like her so much! Now I just want her dead.. what she did is not forgivable.Then there’s the part where she gets stabbed by her dad?! Seriously there are so many curse words coming out of my mouth right now.I’m going to be trying to wait very patiently for the next book but that doesn’t mean I will succeed haha.This was fantastic thank you so much g.Bailey and Scarlett snow you both did amazing on this series already

As soon as this preorder hit my kindle I started reading and couldn't put it down! I love Lilith and the guys in this book and I'll be impatiently waiting for the next to come out! I think there were a couple chapters that were out of order and confused me for a bit but when I went back and read them in the order they should have been in I easily found my place again.

This is a rather underwhelming story put out by two amazing authors. How does that even happen?The characters are one dimensional, the plot is muddled at best and nonexistent at worst, and the entire story is just confusing and disjointed from beginning to end. I didn’t like any of the main characters. The “partners” weren’t, the prince is random, and the blackmailer is good at healing and massage? There is zero foundation for the supposed relationships to be built on. Don’t get me started on the FMC, for such a rare and supposedly powerful wolf, she’s not powerful at all… Not if she can be beaten nearly to death without doing any damage at all to her attacker, needs to be saved from herself more often than not, and has zero influence over anything except in one scene. That scene makes less than no sense btw. This is a train wreck of a story that I have no desire to read more of.The premise is fantastic, but the execution is very much not. This reads like a first draft which is a disservice to the characters and to the readers. I do not recommend at all.

The path that Lilith has to take in life is hard. Knowing that her momma died to save her was sad but she is a big fighter. The men she gets to know are protective for her. The danger the Alpha is to her and is after her she will fight to death. Congrats on this book it was a good read.

The first in the series and wonderfully written. I draws you end and sends you on this adventure through hell. The world building is imaginative, invigorating and engaging. Characters are likeable and enjoyable to read.The main female character is on the run to safe herself from her rejected mate. Finding herself in hell, she looks for safety in the Demon hunting trails with her brothers best friend. Finding friends, and protectors but also a new family with her rescued "fur" babies.There are a series of main male characters but with the twist in the end. Who is truly friend or foe. Just love the mystery of not knowing. Leads to wonderful intrigue and makes for excellent read.I off to find book number 2 and get some answers after the stellar cliffhanger.

Flows nicely, well written. Great characters and plot. Slow burn, so definitely more about the story line, which I do prefer.

Loved it , i was hooked from the very first page and i couldn’t stop untill it was over. I can't wait to read the next book.

Loved this book! Love all of the characters and I loved the storyline. I cannot wait to read the next one!

Wow just wow couldn't put it down can't wait for the next one got five stars would recommend this series